[Scummvm-cvs-logs] CVS: web faq.php,1.38,1.39

[Max Horn]

Update of /cvsroot/scummvm/web
In directory sc8-pr-cvs1.sourceforge.net:/tmp/cvs-serv28219

Modified Files:
	faq.php 
Log Message:
Some more changes. Once again, this is really a job for a native speaker

Index: faq.php
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RCS file: /cvsroot/scummvm/web/faq.php,v
retrieving revision 1.38
retrieving revision 1.39
diff -u -d -r1.38 -r1.39
--- faq.php	27 Oct 2004 23:46:37 -0000	1.38
+++ faq.php	27 Oct 2004 23:49:29 -0000	1.39
@@ -72,8 +72,8 @@
       <li><a href="#4-8">The characters in my non english game are messed up.</a></li>
       <li><a href="#4-9">How do I make my mac version of a game work?</a></li>
       <li><a href="#4-10">Reporting Bugs.</a></li>
-      <li><a href="#4-11">I downloaded Broken Sword packs from your site but game won't run.</a></li>
-      <li><a href="#4-12">There is no picture in Broken Sword I intro.</a></li>
+      <li><a href="#4-11">I downloaded the Broken Sword packs from your site but the game won't run.</a></li>
+      <li><a href="#4-12">There are no graphics in the Broken Sword I intro.</a></li>
     </ol>
   </li>
 
@@ -316,15 +316,15 @@
 	<a href="compatibility.php">compatibility listing</a> for that game to ensure
 	the issue is not already known.</p></li>
 
-      <li><p><a name="4-11"></a><b>I downloaded Broken Sword packs from your site but game won't run.</b><br>
+      <li><p><a name="4-11"></a><b>I downloaded the Broken Sword packs from your site but the game won't run.</b><br>
 	These are not full games but reencoded cutscene (video) packs. To run the games you 
-	still need original disks. Originally cutscenes were encoded in proprietary
+	still need the original disks. Originally cutscenes were encoded in proprietary
 	format and Revolution Software kindly permitted us to reencode them into
-	MPEG and distribute freely from our site.
+	MPEG and distribute them freely on our site.
 	</p></li>
             
-      <li><p><a name="4-12"></a><b>There is no picture in Broken Sword I intro.</b><br>
-	Be patient. There are about 12 seconds of speech only and eventually Revolution logo
+      <li><p><a name="4-12"></a><b>There are no graphics in the Broken Sword I intro.</b><br>
+	Be patient. There are about 12 seconds of speech only and eventually the Revolution logo
 	will appear.
 	</p></li>