[Scummvm-cvs-logs] SF.net SVN: scummvm:[53533] web/trunk/data/news/20101015.xml

[mthreepwood at users.sourceforge.net]

Revision: 53533
          http://scummvm.svn.sourceforge.net/scummvm/?rev=53533&view=rev
Author:   mthreepwood
Date:     2010-10-16 01:22:53 +0000 (Sat, 16 Oct 2010)

Log Message:
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WEB: Some wording/spelling/grammar fixes

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    web/trunk/data/news/20101015.xml

Modified: web/trunk/data/news/20101015.xml
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--- web/trunk/data/news/20101015.xml	2010-10-16 01:15:29 UTC (rev 53532)
+++ web/trunk/data/news/20101015.xml	2010-10-16 01:22:53 UTC (rev 53533)
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 
 <p>As you have probably already realized, this release has support for SCI, and moreover,
 <a href="http://scummvm.org/compatibility/1.2.0/">the list of compatible</a> games goes beyond
-the original FreeSCI which was merged some 1.5 years ago. We support <i>Conquest of 
+the original FreeSCI which was merged about 1.5 years ago. We support <i>Conquests of 
 Camelot/the Longbow</i>, <i>Castle/Island of Dr. Brain</i>, <i>Codename: ICEMAN</i>,
 <i>EcoQuest 1&2</i>, <i>all four Hoyle games</i>, <i>Freddy Pharkas</i>, <i>Jones
 in the Fast Lane</i>, <i>King's Quest I-VI</i>, both <i>Laura Bow</i> games, 
@@ -26,13 +26,13 @@
 <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FScrBr16vkM">this video</a> produced by one
 of our SCI engine developers and see for yourself.</p>
 
-<p>Besides SCI, we have added support for yet another Coktel game called <i>Fascination</i>, also
+<p>Besides SCI, we have added support for yet another Coktel Vision game called <i>Fascination</i> and
 we have a number of new ports: Android, Dingux, Caanoo and OpenPandora. Unfortunately we had
 to declare the PalmOS port officially dead.</p>
 
-<p>As usual there are tons of engine-specific bugfixes. Take a look at the
+<p>As usual there are tons of engine-specific bug fixes. Take a look at the
 <a href="https://sourceforge.net/projects/scummvm/files/scummvm/1.2.0/ReleaseNotes/view">release notes</a>
-if you want to know more. But wait, we would like to tell a little bit about 
+if you want to know more. But wait! We would like to tell a little bit about 
 another long-awaited feature new in this release. After all these years we are finally 
 going international, and the ScummVM GUI can be translated into any language (well, 
 almost any). Right now we have Catalan, English, French, German, Italian, Russian, Spanish 
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
 like tooltips, radio buttons, improved usability and we support more games running 
 from original media without the need to shuffle the game files.</p>
 
-<p>Enough talking, now it is time to <a href="http://www.scummvm.org/downloads/">download</a> ScummVM
+<p>Enough talking! Now it is time to <a href="http://www.scummvm.org/downloads/">download</a> ScummVM
 and start playing!</p>
 
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