[Scummvm-cvs-logs] SF.net SVN: scummvm:[56052] web/trunk/data/news/20110528.xml

Sun May 29 15:01:33 CEST 2011

Revision: 56052
          http://scummvm.svn.sourceforge.net/scummvm/?rev=56052&view=rev
Author:   wjpalenstijn
Date:     2011-05-29 13:01:33 +0000 (Sun, 29 May 2011)

Log Message:
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NEWS: Tweak grammar

Modified Paths:
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    web/trunk/data/news/20110528.xml

Modified: web/trunk/data/news/20110528.xml
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--- web/trunk/data/news/20110528.xml	2011-05-29 12:41:19 UTC (rev 56051)
+++ web/trunk/data/news/20110528.xml	2011-05-29 13:01:33 UTC (rev 56052)
@@ -4,19 +4,19 @@
 <BODY>
 
 <p>
-It has been pretty long time since the last release. Nevertheless the team is happy to announce release of ScummVM 1.3.0.
+It has been longer than usual since the last release. Nevertheless the team is happy to announce the release of ScummVM 1.3.0.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-The release is truly feature rich, and particularly we are introducing support for new platform, WebOS, and added set of new games:
+The release is truly feature-rich: in particular we are introducing support for a new platform, WebOS, and adding a set of new games:
 <i>Urban Runner</i>, <i>Playtoons</i>, <i>Toonstruck</i>, <i>Hugo</i> series, <i>Living Books</i>, <i>Backyard Baseball</i>.
-Also we continued to work hard on SCI engine, so Amiga and some Macintosh versions of the games are supported now too.
-Many of our ports got improvements, and number of bugs got fixed in practically every engine. Thus your gameplay should
-be smoother, lighter and more enjoyable.
+We have also continued to work hard on the SCI engine, so Amiga and some Macintosh versions of the games are supported now too.
+Many of our ports received improvements, and a number of bugs have been fixed in practically every engine. Thus your gameplay should
+be smoother and more enjoyable.
 </p>
 
-<p>As usual, the release is available from our <a href="http://www.scummvm.org/downloads">downloads</a> page
-and full release notes could be found <a href="https://sourceforge.net/projects/scummvm/files/scummvm/1.3.0/ReleaseNotes/view">here</a>.
+<p>As usual, the release can be found on our <a href="http://www.scummvm.org/downloads">downloads page</a>
+and <a href="https://sourceforge.net/projects/scummvm/files/scummvm/1.3.0/ReleaseNotes/view">full release notes</a> are also available.
 </p>
 
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